March 30

I think our peers will really like the music for our film as well as the story line and cinematography. The music was made for the film by suzanne's dad. It adds feeling and emotion especially in the montage. The story is sweet and interesting. The cinematography is really good because we had access to a nice camera. The montage at the end will also be a popular part of our film because it shows the progression of their relationship and flows very smoothly because of the communication and planning between cinematographer and editor.
I would like the audience to comment on how the montage affects the film. I would also like commentary on if the first scene should be shortened. There is very little action in it but it is important to open up the movie. Should it be shorter?